GREAT ONE TO DO--LIVE--I LOVE THIS STUFF--HAS A GREAT FEEL AND GROOVE TO IT--I like the music etc..keep up the great composing--might be a great movie soundtrack--ya never know--thanxs--joe
I like the choice of instruments, and the mix, this is a nice piece of work. I thought if you added like where the organ comes in just before the 2:35 mark, and had the vocals a bit on the 'gritty' sound side, it would give it a ton of emotion. I would be tempted to change nothing but try retake on the vocal track but add soe real emotion to the vocals, just for authenticity. In other words, you could make me feel hurt, pain, even to the point of tears. The music/tempo just tendss to lend it to that emotion appealThat's just my feel, take no offense, none is intended. This song has merit. It is a great song and nicely played, the performance instrumentally is great. You did a nice job here on this one and I like it.