Really cool song!! Very clever lyric, good hook, good arrangement, and the playing/singing sounds really good! Well done all the way around!!
Love the lyrics. Hook is good.
This is cool. Lyrics were a surprise. The music is good for low-fi pitches as well as alternative rock. Everything works together. Do some mixes of various lengths, like 60 second and 30 second so the client can use those if he wishes. Pitch the full length but mention in the notes that you have the other mixes too. This is edgy, brave, and bold. Meaning it won't get as many pitches as the sweet little teeny bopper stuff, but when you find a pitch, no one will be able to compete with you.
Cool message here. Really good lyrics. Nice arrangement. I definitely hear a Talking Heads vibe here. Good job.
Kind of a Bowie, sort of retro psychedelia, feel to the track.
Original, fun, catchy