Thanks for keeping the message clear and strong! i like the chord you use towards the end of the progression--different and refreshing!
The song had a interesting subdued approach for a religious song. I liked the almost talking way the artist vocalized the song
I am not a huge fan of Religious Music, so I will be a tough reviewer.......sorry!! I actually really like the sound of the lead vocal, has a Bob Dylan, Tom Petty quality to it!! You might try using Band-in-A-Box to construct your compositions, they use real players and will make the over all music sound a tad more polished. Using BIABox....it's as if you are hiring live session players for your composition. These are just a few suggestions and just one person's opinion, see what other Broad Jam Members say about your song?
Here's a Christmas song with a new slant...it has a verse about how they celebrate Jesus' birth in Mexico. Nice drums and guitar and a heartfelt performance that communicates love and respect for Jesus Christ. I like the guitar and drums and the ending is nicely done.
captures indie folk/blues well, great job invoking Bob Dylan in the vocalisms...the bridge that summarizes and reverts back to home to close and fade, very skilled songwriting and a great performance as well.
You guys never disappoint. I still hear a lot of the Edgar Winter Group in here, especially in the transitions. Everything seems to mesh together here so perfectly. Fantastic job.