It's unique, which in my opinion is the highest compliment I can give. That's what I always look for in an artist. I liked the orchestration a lot, the way the acoustic and electric guitars, horns, and vocals interacted was very nice.
Good job on the mix. I can hear everything well. Everything is placed well. Good blend and use of electric guitar and muted trumpet. the instrumentation definitely sets the intended mood. I get your poem. Thanks for sharing your art.