Lyrics are great,
Reminds me a little of Rufus wainwright
Instrumentation is very cool.
Now where do we start ! The idea of the song reminded of THE SNIPER by Harry Chapin , who just happens to be my favourite singer songwriter . If you haven't heard it , check it out .
You have a very unique voice , it won't be to everyone's taste , but I found it interesting to say the least .
This song is a wake-up call to the lazy guy who is down on his luck and wants to end it all. It's a powerful song with lyrics that basically punch you in the gut, they are so hard-hitting. I mean that in a good way. This artist is extremely original and has obviously found his own voice. He's singing about something I have never heard anyone singing about before. He's abrupt, ruthless, and honest, yet hopeful: You're not alone. Someone loves you. But get off your rear end and quit feeling sorry for yourself. I hope that this song inspires many. It impressed the heck out of me! Love the cello at the beginning and the end. Instrumentation was great. Mix great. Vocals clearly sung. This is a winner.
Lyrics a little worrying and downbeat, although reassuring in parts. An unusual song - like something Talking Heads would do. Yes, I think I like it, give me more !
unique vocals, unique song and arrangement . good lyrics. kind of rock /indie/ish like a modern western this song
musically there is a lot to it. interesting arrangement , some great sounds , the beginning musically sets the tone of more to come
enjoyable track makes the listener want to hear ago as there is a lot to hear.
love the acoustic guitar recording. if it were a wine it'd be buttery!
at times the vocals sound a bit like an 80's band (Midnight Oil) so I dug the sound right from the start.
What a story I hope not yours...cello part is just great makes it feel dark .Intro with cello and guitar awesome, nice harmony parts...love the parts of music that go dark, what a trip...nice ending with the cello...not an expected instrument for a story like this.
Certainly a set of lyrics that made me sit up and listen...the style grew on me during the song...I put it in the folk category but its a bit hard to categorise.( thats good in my head) could just as well bu a punk song given a different arrangement
Very listenable, intriging lyrics and a "real" performance!
Nice job.
Lot's of attitude in the vocals... sincerity is there... nice bass playing too
unusual lyrics, interesting, well recorded
cool tune here...great message.
Love this style of song. Reminds me of songs from "rocky horror" or another similar style of musical. Could possibly market this with theater, movies.
The lyrics match perfectly with the mood of the music (the more pessimistic lyrics with the minor keys and the optimistic ones with the major ones).
I like this kind of music. There's a message to it. There are really good lyrics and the instrumentation is very good. It's almost a talky/singy kind of vocal, but it works well with this song. The chorus fits too. Smooth arrangement and pretty original. We don't hear a lot of this music on the radio. This is pretty cool. Real music. Not manufactured.
for people who are insecure
Great arrangement! The instrumentation surrounding a strong and unique vocal was awesome! The progression kept me listening with interest.