I love your voice. The relaxed feel of the song is really engaging, and i like how it builds to the strings at the end.

Nice, clean song. Enjoyed listening to it. Surely has a place in the market.

Pretty song

I really liked this love song...oh so sweet...can just picture it melting a girl's heart. The lyrics are lovely and creative; I didn't find them trite at all. Helter-skelter/fall out shelter - FUN! So I gotta ask: Did that come out of your head or a rhyming dictionary? Instrumentation was oh so pretty! The synth worked well, except it didn't ease out (strings or something?) as gently as I would have liked.

Nice lyrics. I like the simple notions and construction of this song.

Very nice. Love the guitar in this piece. I like the sweetness and positiveness of the lyrics. I'd rather hear this on the radio than what's currently being played.

like the instrumentation, especially how the bass comes in and stays with us, strings are fairly convincing, think this version would be better as a meditative instrumental IMO...vocal is a tad corny and retro sounding. but on key. i like the arrangement.

Nice vocals guitar and strings well put together

I liked the interpretation of this song. The lyrics are also very good structured to complement the melody. I also liked the guitar.