the hook is the truth for real. you headed the right direction
I think the Instrumental is strong. The arrangement of the instrumental is structured uniquely. The way it bounces back from the arpeggiated keys against the boom bap, the mid section refrains with the bass drone is spaced well. I definitely want to hear more from this artist, especially if the spacing was managed or revised. I think the "One shot" vocalist could potentially be a decent hook, if built upon a little more.