Great hooks and playing - with the right production on this, would make an awesome theme in a movie or show or something

First impression is good, I mean I really admire musicians who can do this style because it is sweat and blood hard music to make, it is good to be able to perform and play on a guitar or any instrument in nowdays when so many use only computers and softwares. I like the vibe and the harshness of the song but in my personal opinion would come something really good if you could hook up with someone with a great lead of other instrument or vocal to break up the monotony of only hard guitar. Overall I send you all my best and admiration for doing something real from your heart. Keep up and open your heart for more...be more open in your songs. Thank you!

Nice meaty drive. Good riff. As a backing track it's great. Are you planning to add more? I would suggest a higher register melody or lead solo over the top.