Enjoyed the vocal tone and pitch was decent. Lyrics are thoughtful.
Great tune, really good interesting lyrics. I really enjoyed the song structure, in fact its just a good quality, interesting, challenging song
That was an interesting song. If I could walk on water...only Peter and Jesus did that, and when Peter took his eyes off Jesus, he started sinking. Your take is....If only you could walk on water....and then your imagination breaks loose with all sorts of possible happenings. Pretty clever. I think your lyric writing is very original. The hook is memorable.